Common App Essay!

<p>Hi guys. I need help spicing up my essay. Any suggestions as to where I should add imagery and change wording, etc.? Overall impressions?
Never done this before.
Please no one applying to Tufts or people who aren't relatively active here on CC. Thanks.</p>

<p>send over if u like. wish i could get into tufts ;O.</p>

<p>Sent, thanks</p>

<p>Bump-izzle because everyone here on the board is trying to sound G</p>

<p>did my edits make sense?</p>

<p>A lot of them did and helped me cut down a bit. There are some things that I feel I still need to add and move around. BUt again, thanks for your efforts :D</p>

<p>send it. i'll review it</p>

<p>Sent! Any others? :D</p>

<p>I'll be glad to look it over. :)</p>

<p>Sure, i think i might offer some good ideas</p>

<p>Sent! Thanks guys</p>

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<p>hey il help u out
pm me =D</p>