<p>About 500 words, pm me if you would like to critique it, please.
I can critique yours back.</p>
<p>send it on over. i got some time to waste.</p>
<p>Anyone else?
Preferably someone who will reply back, lol</p>
<p>Sure.
Can you edit mine too? (it's not common app...)</p>
<p>alone i did reply. ill send it again.</p>
<p>Sorry, I got it second time :)</p>
<p>10charbump</p>