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<p>Do we benefit from learning about the flaws of people we admire and respect?</p>

<p>A moral always come out of an error and people can learn from it. We benefit from learning about the flaws of people we admire and respect because it shows people how to learn from that mistake and move on. Even the people that seem perfect have flaws. By learning from the malfunctions did by people we esteem, people won’t do the same mistake again, and learn how to become more successful. </p>

<p>People will not do the same mistake because they will be aware of the consequences. For example, is one has a sister and she does something wrong, one can learn from her error. This will cause a person not do the mistake again and learn something from the sister mistake. In addition, the person, by learning what is wrong, could also be aware of the consequences faced after the flaw takes place. By knowing what is wrong from the influence of another person is beneficial because one won’t do the same mistake and the generations following that person will learn from them. </p>

<p>Some might become successful by learning from the mistakes done by people they admire or respect. In life a pathway of flawlessness is a key to success. If there are many ups and down in one’s life record it may be hard for them to become successful. For instance, if there’s a tyro business man and the person he learned a mistake was another entrepreneur, he can become successful by using that mistake as an advantage. He or she can avoid the mistake that the entrepreneur did and climb success quickly. As the entrepreneur is recovering from his mistake and facing the consequences, the business man can climb the “success” steps quickly.</p>

<p>Being perfect is impossible, no matter what a person is. We benefit from learning about the flaws of people we admire and respect because it shows people how to learn from that mistake and move on. Learning from the mistakes made by people that we esteem can earn to success and it might prevent someone from doing the same mistake. It is up to the person whether to move on and learn or remain where they are. </p>