<p>Since I'm an int'l student, I don't have confidence in my usage of words in my essay, even though I got a perfect score in MCQ in SAT. If somebody will accept my request, I will PM my essay to him/her. Thank you in advance! </p>
<p>My essay is for Personal Essay of Common App and has about 600 words. The prompt is the following:</p>
<p>Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.</p>