<p>can somebody proof read my common app essay. I'd like as much advise as possible espicially regarding content and grammar.</p>
<p>The prompt is Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.</p>
<p>Any help would be appreciated I feel really nervous because the word limit barely let me touch the surface of my experience</p>