<p>Topic: Is it important to do work that one finds fulfilling or work that pays well?</p>
<p>Essay: ImageShack</a> Album - 2 images</p>
<p>Could someone please grade my essay? I'd appreciate any comments as well! Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>Good Essay, but please make it in printed version.
I give 8/12 for couple of reasons:
*Use of language is not very comprehensive
*Volume isn’t enormous
*Limited vocabulary
Advantages:
*Good points
*Good composition of essay
*Critical thinking</p>
<p>I’d say 8. It lacks a nuanced understanding of English grammar and vocabulary, doesn’t make the point well, and isn’t organised very well, but it answers the question in a readable and easy-to-follow essay.</p>
<p>I will never grade your essay any more.</p>