Could someone read my essay today too? pretty please??

<p>This is the supplemental essay to yale where you can write about anything you want. I wrote about how reading has affected me (cliche, I know). Could somebody please read it ?! I don't think that my grammar's too bad, so I really want someone to critique it based on content. Thanks!</p>

<p>i will... wanna look at mine?</p>

<p>yeah! i'll pm you</p>

<p>Oh, shoot. I totally forgot about the Yale supplemental essays! I guess I have... a little more than a day to work on it?</p>

<p>By the way, lakshmi52, how long is your essay?</p>

<p>its funny, but I originally could not get my essay to go beyond like 200 words but now actually had to cut it down to about 502 words. i just started writing and I couldn't shut myself up =)</p>

<p>any other takers ?</p>