Criticize my essay please! (diction, grammar, etc)

College Essays
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<p>Hello, I think this will be the last revision of my essay for Georgia Tech. (due Nov 1)</p>

<p>I think I still have diction and grammar problems :( . If anyone is willing to read and comment on my essay, I'll be really appreciated. </p>

<p>Thank You!</p>

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<p>If you want constructive criticism, PM me.</p>

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<p>@ilikeUW
Thanks! Just pmed you :)</p>

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<p>any more takers? :?
I only have few hours left and I really need some more feedbacks!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>@eyelashwishes
Thank You! pmed you my essay :)</p>

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<p>Eek, I’ll review anyone’s if they want to look at mine real quick. It’s unfinished right now, but I’m not sure if it’s too much (word count) or just right. I think it’s good so far.</p>

<p>It’s for the common app Extracurricular essay btw. It has like 819 words… probably 1200-1300 after it’s all done. Due Nov. 1st. >_>;</p>

<p>PM if willing.</p>