<p>It's not really the best. But you can still critique it....</p>
<p>Post here and I'll pm or email you.</p>
<p>Please PM!
I’ll be happy to give some advice.</p>
<p>With that headline who can resist? PM it to me if you still need help.</p>
<p>ill critiqueeee
PM it, and where are you applying?</p>
<p>pm me. make sure you pm the topic as well.</p>
<p>You definitely piqued my curiosity, haha… PM it? :)</p>
<p>PM me if you want. I’m pretty harsh so you’ll get the real deal</p>
<p>Id love to take a look. PM it over.</p>
<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine lol</p>
<p>you made me curious which means your essay might be interesting
PM me</p>
<p>The Best? Who could resist reading that </p>
<p>PM it to me</p>