Critique UC Prompt #2??

College Essays
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<p>Anyone care to read?</p>

<p>Prompt: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?:</p>

<p>If yes, ill send you a PM! All critiques would be great. Thanks to anyone that reads it!</p>

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<p>yes i can read it for you
pm me</p>

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<p>great! anyone else care to help out?</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>sure! I'll love to read your essay! I'll give you some feeback too. I just finished my UC personal statement prompt 1, wanna do an essay exchange? ;)</p>

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<p>I'll read yours if you read my UC prompt 1.</p>

<p>pm me. You too twilight girl.</p>

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<p>great! any other takers??</p>

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<p>sure. :0 PM it.</p>

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<p>sure ill read it :] PM it to me!</p>

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<p>oh i'll read it :D</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read it...
if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account </p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>