UC Prompt #2 proofread please?

<p>Hi, I just finished my 2nd UC Prompt</p>

<p>"Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?"</p>

<p>I'd like some feedback on it so if you could help, that would be great ! I can PM my essay to you since that seems to bolster security I hear? :o</p>

<p>Please and thank you so much!</p>

<p>I’ll read.</p>

<p>cool, thanks :slight_smile: i’ll send it to you~</p>