critique why penn essay?

<p>the title pretty much says it all...</p>

<p>would anyone like to critique my why penn essay? preferably an already admitted student. :)</p>

<p>sure just send it on over</p>

<p>sure pm me</p>

<p>Let me just remind you to think of the dangers of doing this. Remember you are sending your unique Why Penn essay to complete strangers... Just keep that in mind</p>