<p>Anybody want to read my second draft? </p>
<p>I played the culture card, but I have a feeling it's not going anywhere - just pointless narration...</p>
<p>Any suggestions would be appreciated.</p>
<p>Send it over.</p>
<p>Sure thing</p>
<p>pm me as well, i’m writing a semi-cultural essay as well. my suggestion is don’t focus too much on the cultural shock and the cultural difference, instead focus the similarity and how you integrated the two cultures. (just my 2 cents since i didn’t even read ur essay yet lol)</p>