Hello!
I am applying for a summer camp scholarship and I guess I have to write an essay to go with the application. Could someone take a look at it for me? I literally just finished the first draft last night, and reading over it today I can tell (a) I have no idea what I’m supposed to do and (b) it’s going to need some work. If you could just read the essay and tell me if it sounds like a good start, I would know if I’m on the right path…otherwise I might just start over lol.
PM me! It’s really short, barely a page. The intro is kind of funny. Idk I tried. 
