Dartmouth Article

Colleges and Universities A-Z Dartmouth College
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<p>Cheers!</p>

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<p>nice article, but if you are gonna apply, just remember its Dartmouth College</p>

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<p>oops :o </p>

<p>Not my mistake its the stupid dictionary integerated into the portal.</p>

<p>Anyways, Thanks for your feedback!</p>

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<p>pretty bad</p>

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<p>erm....bad? Can you be specific? :)</p>

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<p>uh</p>

<p>bad throughout</p>

<p>*I can deliver more specific criticisms if you really want them.</p>

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<p>Yeah sure! why not? :)</p>

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<p>Oh dear... please change the title... </p>

<p>You have an interesting perspective, but I'd focus on the writing style. This will help you when you write your application essays as well. Pare down any words you don't need and only use words that feel natural and get your point across. </p>

<p>Also, there are many reasons why I love Dartmouth, but I don't think I'd include blitz and one prof's leniency during a bio test. When you visit, I hope you find that there are even more reasons why Dartmouth is so great.</p>

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<p>Wow. After reading your little essay, I'm actually more excited about attending than i was before :-)</p>

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Also, there are many reasons why I love Dartmouth, but I don't think I'd include blitz

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<p>funny you should mention that. The first time i referred to email as 'blitz' in front of my paki friends they just went 'huh?' Now they've all started using it colloquially (damn i hope i spelled that right). They say it sounds less awkward (as both verb and noun) than 'e-mail'. :-)</p>

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<p>I mean blitz is great but it's not the first thing I'd mention when trying to recruit new students.</p>

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<p>Thank you BigGreenJen and ammarsfound.</p>

<p>BigGreenJen: I have changed the title ;) lol I tried using the words that I had memorized from the SAT word list the other day! I guess I will trim it a little :D</p>

<pre><code> I am sure there are lots of other reasons to love Dartmouth. I completely love the campus and stuff. But since I can't visit Dartmouth I cannot clearly write about my other reasons why I love Dartmouth. If anyone of you would like to add a para or two before I release this month's issue please let me know. I would appreciate it.
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<p>Ammarsfound : when do you leave for Dartmouth? :) </p>

<p>PS: BigGreenJen when is that AIDS awareness trip of yours?</p>