Deadline in 3 hours... Can someone QUCIKLY revise my UC prompt #2 essay? :)

<p>Yup, just wrote this essay because I am perhaps the biggest procrastinator ever. If anyone is kind enough to help me out I will be eternally grateful! The prompt is: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>I'm just looking for some feedback here to let me know if I'm totally screwed. :) I appreciate it, thank you so much in advance! Just let me know and I shall PM it to you pronto!</p>

<p>i am willling to !</p>

<p>Anyone else? I am really desperate. D:</p>

<p>The server hasn’t crashed yet?? Man, your one lucky dude…</p>

<p>not a dude… :slight_smile: and I successfully turned in my app!</p>