<p>My other essays are really great, but I am not so sure about my original essay anymore. Maybe I just read it and changed it too many times. It is about extraordinary circumstances that fueled my 150k business. I am looking for a fresh reader w/o my biases to give me their opinion. I have some good jokes in it, but due to the subject, it's not nearly as lively as my others.</p>
<p>I can be that fresh pair of eyes.</p>
<p>PM me if you'd like.</p>
<p>PM me and I can give it a read.</p>
<p>I haven't read any of your essays so I think I can judge this one on its own merits. PM me if you want.</p>
<p>you have a 150k business? are you serious? I'm more interested in the story than the essay, but I'll give it a read.</p>
<p>i'm very interested in your essay. PM me.</p>
<p>Sure, I'll critique it. PM me.</p>