Does my essay for 4/1 SAT sound fine?

<p>Just to give an idea, I just got nervous since the question was so open-ended.</p>

<p>Something like: "Should change be perceived as being inconsistency?"</p>

<p>I basically talked about change the whole time, though I approached it by writing something like:</p>

<p>Change is necessary in life as a pragmatic approach to living (yes it was worded better than that). Though some may consider change inconsistent, it is necessary to make changes as we achieve our aspirations and gain new understandings in life.</p>

<p>I then went on and talked about how change is pragmatic (not inconsistent) using examples. Is this all fine for the essay?</p>

<p>You know, when you send your scores to colleges, they get to read an actual copy of the essay, which will probably include your made-up personal examples. Hopefully, they're not too far out of left field!</p>

<p>edit: If you have no idea what I'm talking about, my apologies. Ignore this post, I'm reading too far into yours.</p>

<p>He didn't say he made up examples, did he?</p>

<p>BTW, colleges really aren't going to read those essays.</p>

<p>A thesis and examples are all you need, but you're not giving me nearly enough information for the essay. The essay you've described to me could range from 4 to 12 depending on how well it was written, but without the essay itself I can only make conjectures. What you've listed should be fine, though.</p>