<p>Hey all!</p>
<p>Okay, I wrote my essay, revised it, re-wrote it, gave it to my English teacher (he liked it), and looked at it again. Still, I'm not entirely confident it works. I feel like it needs something else and I can't put my finger on what. I wrote it after an almost month long case of writers block, so something about it feels weird.</p>
<p>Please feel free to cut into it as much as you possibly can. Respond and I'll PM it over.</p>
<p>Please and thank you!</p>
<p>Oh, right. I'm applying at:</p>
<p>Boston University
Northeastern
Emerson College
Ithaca
Quinnipiac
Umass Amherst
Endicott College</p>