<p>hello everybody. first, i would like to admitt that essays are my weakest weakness. I have done my first rough draft for my college app. essay. and i am hoping everyone on board would help me with improving my essay. thanks in advance!!!</p>
<p>Sure I'll help. PM me</p>
<p>I would be happy to. PM it.</p>
<p>here (10 char)</p>
<p>any comments so far?? :)</p>
<p>bump......</p>
<p>bump.......</p>
<p>well...if you really know a english teacher or your counselor well, go to him/her, especially if they went to a prestigious school for undergraduate.(yea, they also wrote letters for the same kind of school you are applying for now).</p>
<p>yes, that is my next step, after I receive comments from everybody on board.... anybody else wants to read my essay and give me some pointers?</p>
<p>bummmmmmmmmmmmmmmp</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>I could help</p>
<p>thanks so much for all your help.... anybody else want to read?</p>
<p>what i did with my essays was i took them to my english teacher and to the mother of one of my mom's friends whose son got accepted to Yale. Both she and her son gave me feedback. So yeah, if you know anyone who got into a really good school, ask them or their mom if you know them well for guidance</p>
<p>haha iloveschool, i like your thinking</p>
<p>pm me too, i have really good grammar skillz (when i'm not typing online, haha)</p>
<p>pm sent, :)</p>
<p>i've sent out so many PMs, how come only two replied? :(</p>
<p>dunno...laziness?</p>