Essay critique an Australian international

<p>Hi, anyone willing to read and critique my essay, please PM me or reply to this thread. It's about my research during the summer, so can fit a variety of essay prompts.</p>

<p>Please be fully honest. If you think its trash, or will not get me admission, say so clearly. If you think it needs fixing up, please be specific.</p>

<p>Just FYI, I'm applyin to Stanford, Boston U, MIT, UCB, UCLA, USC, and Yale</p>

<p>No '09 freshman applicants please. :)</p>

<p>oo sounds interesting please do send</p>

<p>Sure. Feel free to send it. Just make sure it's within the next day. After that, I can't promise a timely reply.</p>

<p>bumpy bump</p>

<p>sure...i'll take a look!</p>

<p>bump, please more college students to read my essay plz</p>

<p>anyone? I've only had 1 reader, the rest of the replies are from '09 freshman applicants so I couldn't release essay to them. I would really love feedback on the essay</p>

<p>pm me! i like essays on research experience</p>

<p>bump, still have only had 1 reader, unfortunately everyone else replying is an '09 applicant</p>

<p>~~@||bump||@~~</p>

<p>PM me.......</p>

<p>im australian too, where are you from?</p>

<p>I'm in Sydney</p>

<p>oh really? im applying 09 too, but completly different schools. (Barnard, Columbia, Princeton, Vassar, Smith,UPenn). How does your HSC match up to american grades, do you know?</p>

<p>i don't know how they convert exactly, so im gona report them as just HSC marks. I'm a little scared about my raw school marks though. For example, my HSC estimate for Extension 2 Mathematics is 93, but my raw final year mark was 64. This is because raw marks are not indicative between different subjects. What do you think frankechanel?</p>

<p>Can i read them too.</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>I'm from sydney too and applying to fairly similar schols (Brown, USC, UCLA, Columbia)
I'm so stuck with marks, I go to a selective school so my marks aren't anywhere near what they should be for the actual HSC.
Uch is soo annoying.
Like my estimated UAI is somewhere in the high 90's last I checked it was 97.6 but I got like 82 in my chem trial and like 80 in ext 2 maths.</p>