<p>Hi,</p>
<p>I want to apply for the summer program at Baylor. They require you to write a 2-page essay on why you became interested in science. I truly became interested in science and medicine when my little brother was diagnosed with Autism. I made it my goal to become a neurologist and help people going through the same condition.</p>
<p>Would it be too cliche for me to write about this as my essay? I don't want this to be a "dead dog" essay, nor do I want to look like I'm desperately attempting to get the pity vote. Would this be an acceptable essay?</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>