Essays (Looking back)

<p>I had to explain my gpa going down a bit in my personal statement thus:</p>

<p>Perhaps my most meaningful personal experience is no experience but more of a drawn out situation in my life. Up until the end of my senior year in high school my life and the lives of my parents were all about me. I lived in a perfect bubble in which the world was my oyster and other similar dreadful cliches. But, the universe, sensing I was in too euphoric of a fantasy land sent me a secular wake-up call in the form of my grandfather beginning a downward spiral of health. I declined the offer of acceptance from the University I had wanted to attend since the sixth grade in the hopes that within a year everything would be perfect again, and I could move on with my life, but only after I cared for my grandfather, because after all he would have done the same for me as our cultural expectations dictate.</p>

<p>As it turned out things weren't as simple in life as I had anticipated and so I spent the next three years caring for my grandfather. Within a year the man who had showered me with butterfly kisses and had taught me how to shoot my first sling shot at my dads rear end when I was a young un' had turned into nothing more but a faint hollow reflection of what he had once been. The grip that had usually been so strong was weak and shaky in my hands, and the glorious thick silver hair wasted away with the rest of him as the years passed by. I gladly took off days and even whole semesters of school to sit by his bedside and read Pride and Prejudice and Wuthering Heights to him, cherishing every time he offered his sardonic comments on the love lives of my literary heroes. I wish I could say that within those moments I would have given everything I could to trade places with him, to save him, but that would be a lie. Listening to the pain he experienced throughout the night only made me fear death more, and as I forced myself to think of better days, the idea of my mortality and time on this planet was only sharpened. </p>

<p>He always asked me how school was going and I lied and made him believe that I was a star student, covered up the fact that I withdrew from so many classes because it hurt me so much to come home and find him choking on his own fluids while my mother wasted away in a fit of helplessness because like me she could do nothing to help him. In his eyes I was at the top of the Dean's List, and I was going to do great things, because I had all the opportunities he hadn't. I can't express how with every fiber in my being I wanted to be what he saw, but I never found the strength or desire to be as much.</p>

<p>A few weeks ago I woke up in the morning and found him half way between the doorway to the bathroom we shared. He had apparently gotten dizzy during the night, fallen and broken his nose. The doctors said he had some sort of heart attack but the thought of him choking to death on his blood never leaves my mind. And even as I have that horrible picture in my mind a part of me can't help but feel relief at the fact that he's gone. These past years with my Pop Pop taught me that sometimes death is not the worst outcome, and that life doesn't have to be about me always for me to be happy. Even though he was so sick I got to spend those last days with him and I will cherish them forever. It's with his image in my mind that I strive and dare to hope to be accepted once more into an institution of merit and make those lies that I told him once into realities.</p>

<p>wow equinebeing, talk about a contradiction from mine (in a great way), here it is:</p>

<p>Wearing a crucifix in my second grade school picture killed my grandpa. As I watched my father proudly hand over the photograph, I looked at my grandfathers eyes slowly turn empty. He sat silently, almost as if he had taken on the form of a mannequin, looking blankly at my face. Yet, it was not my face, I realized many years later, that he was in fact looking at. Instead, it was the delicate cross that laid upon my chest that would prove to be the death of my relationship with the man I called papa. I understood that my grandfather being Jewish played a huge part in his decision to reject me, but after a brush with maturity I was able to comprehend the mental aspects behind his choice. This emotional fatality would encourage my mission for learning. As I move forward with my pursuit of education, Sociology will enable me to use the death of my bond with my granddad and turn it into the birth of my own education. </p>

<pre><code>Sociology is my passion in life. It gives meaning to every situation I am faced with and helps me to understand the motives behind how people really work. It has been a goal in my life to find the distinct connection between my grandfather and the sociological reasons behind his rejection of me. In time I was able to better comprehend the prejudices that he could not avoid due to his background through careful research and volunteer work.

While attending community college and working part time at a law office, I diligently volunteered at a sober college where teenagers had to face their demons with respect to their use of drugs and alcohol. I found comfort in knowing that I was not the only one who struggled with estranged family, and I also prided myself in realizing that instead of using drugs and alcohol as relief, I buried my head in a book that would let me escape from this disheartened situation. I was contented in showing my peers that they were not the only ones dealing with these hardships and through scheduled group sharing I was able to reach out to others as well as help myself. I hoped that speaking out about my own experiences would help those struggling with similar situations cope. I stressed the knowledge that there were more productive ways of dealing with the separation between oneself and a family member and that drugs and alcohol were not the answer.

My hours spent in my Sociology class would lead me to the deeper discovery and understanding that Sociology was more than just a subject, it was something that would educate me beyond what any Math or English class could. It would help me to find myself as an individual throughout this big, wide world and enable me to understand the social instances of hate, love, and sadness surrounding me daily.

As I grew out of my adolescence and into the adult I am today, I am better able to comprehend the close-minded ways of my grandpa.  He had denied me not because of my character, morals, or well-being, but instead due to the significance the cross upon my chest took on.  In time I was able to let go of the resentments and hateful thoughts that once filled my mind and accept the fact that I am who I am, not who he wants me to be.  

Sociology will inaugurate my quest in helping both myself and others who struggle, whether it is from rejection, addiction, or fear. Sociology will help me to answer long awaited questions on the reasons behind my grandpa’s estrangement and give insight into the struggles I’ve perceived as hardship. Overall, Sociology is more than just a major to me; it embodies the truth behind my life lessons and will enable my growth as an individual.
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<p>Prompt #2 </p>

<p>The greatest accomplishment that I have been able to achieve is my relationship with my mother and father. It might not be that special or unusually great for somebody standing on the outside looking in, but to me it embodies more than just a familiar bond. My mom and dad have been the rock in my life, constantly pushing me to be the best I can be. I have learned over the years to value such substantial supporters and to nurture our relationship with care and consideration. Our relationship has taught me to have dedication and values, to hold my head up high and truly believe that I have a purpose in life. </p>

<pre><code>There are multiple accomplishments that I have had the pleasure of achieving over the past nineteen years. It is when I look past these tasks and gaze behind them that I see the love and support of my parents, pushing me until I reach the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow of success. There would not have been the endless opportunities for achieving such accomplishments, whether in school or sports, if not for the infinite hours my parents gave up to help me.

Although there are the moments of embarrassment when my mom’s lipstick marks on my cheek are visible after a kiss goodbye, or when my dad decides to call me his favorite nickname, “Squirt”, from across the room of a restaurant, but these are the moments that I am most proud of. These little incenses are what showcase the true care and love that my parents have had for me since my birth. When I ask my parents what there greatest accomplishments are and they immediately say “my children”, I know in my heart that if they asked me I would, without hesitation say “my parents”. Our relationship with each other is something that I will appreciate for the rest of my life. I can forget the shiny gold trophy in my room sitting on my night stand, but I will never forget the immense sense of accomplishment I feel when I think of my mother and father.
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<p>I think you guys have pretty good essays. I remember looking at my essay after submitting it and I noticed a typo. I thought I was doomed, luckily that wasn’t the case.</p>