Example Why Brown Essay

<p>Anyone wanna show me their “Why Brown?” essay? Usually for these
why “school” ? essays, I basically just list reasons in essay form. I feel like that won’t cut it for Brown though.</p>

<p>Anyone mind showing theirs as an example, or just an excerpt?</p>

<p>Promise I won’t copy :)</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>check your private messages</p>

<p>thanks! :)</p>

<p>is that the whole thing? thought it had to be longer.</p>

<p>Nope, that's it. I was told that htere was no need to be fancy with the "why" essays, and just be straight and honest about it. I think it can be as long as you want. It worked for me, anyway.</p>

<p>I'm a HS junior and kinda interested in how what a good essay looks like. Can you PM me that essay? Thanks!</p>

<p>hey, can you do the same...i just sent in my app online, not sure how well i did the "what can brown do for you essay" i know, i sound like the ups commercial, but still</p>

<p>hi. if you don't mind, could you send me the essay too? i just want to get an idea of what you meant by straight. i'm driving myself insane because i can't decide how to approach it. thanks!!</p>

<p>great! thanks for sharing :)</p>

<p>can you e-mail it to me? <a href="mailto:jskim3487@hotmail.com">jskim3487@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>Um. What "Why Brown" essay??</p>

<p>can you email me one of these "why" essays too please? anyone? thank you so much. i am really confused on what they want. i am a junior but i really want to get started on thinking about my essays. my email is <a href="mailto:Brwneyes87@aol.com">Brwneyes87@aol.com</a>
thank you so much, i love you guys</p>

<p>Jesus Christ, Rabo. You just got like 10 essay requests.</p>

<p>I didn't use any real thought when I wrote the "why Brown" essay (if you can call it that). I just wrote why I genuinely wanted to attend Brown. No BS. But for you RDers, I can see how you might need to BS some stuff.</p>

<p>Just focus on your personal statement.</p>

<p>BTW, Juniors: Believe me, it's WAY too early to be considering writing essays. Your school interests are going to change soooo many times, your writing skills will improve, and you'll have had new experiences that may aid you in developing your essays. You are rushing it way too much if you're trying to get your essays done now, nearly a year before your applications will be due.</p>

<p>I know cbomo, it's insane. </p>

<p>All right, everyone, I'm at school right now, so I don't have it, but keep your pants on and I'll get to you this evening.</p>

<p>I know there were so many requests already but can you send me a "why" essay, too? I'm applyin' Swarthmore and I gotta write one. I have my own reasons to want to attend to Swarthmore, I just wanna know an example for reference. Thanks a lot in advance, Rabo! My e-mail is just<em>a</em><a href="mailto:thought_10@yahoo.com">thought_10@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>This is not related to the actual formatting of an essay, but if there are any RD’ers who don’t have a solid idea yet about why they are applying to Brown (I’ll avoid going into why I think that is a bad state of affairs because I know how many schools some of you are applying to), they might be interested in looking at my post, “To those who have been deferred.”</p>

<p>don't stress about it too much, i said "especially" two sentences in a row... (oops) just be sincere. i think they can tell.</p>

<p>hey guys... Can i have a copy of the "why brown" essay as well? I"m a high school junior and I just want to see examples of excellent essay's so that when i apply next year I'll know what they want. Thanks Email it to me at <a href="mailto:TheAnnoyingNerd@aol.com">TheAnnoyingNerd@aol.com</a></p>

<p>wow...for all the copies i've sent out, i guess i should have just posted it. Oh well. Now I can keep track of who to hunt down when my admission gets retracted.</p>

<p>This is ridiculous... seriously, why are so many juniors asking?</p>

<p>Don't comply, Rabo! HAVE DIGNITY</p>

<p>hey ..can i have a copy of the "why brown" too..i am so stressed out because i have no idea what kind of format its meant to be in..i am an international student btw..thanx a bunch Rabo!</p>