<p>Hi...I've been experimenting with a couple essays. I have two essays right now, both based off a similar topic. However, one approaches the topic with imagery and the other with voice. I'd like an insightful opinion on which one is stronger and more communicative. Would anyone like to read? (It's for Stanford, so judge harshly!) Thanks! - I probably won't send to users with low post counts, suspicious backgrounds etc. though since this topic isn't too hard to plagiarize.</p>
<p>I'll be happy to take a look and see which one I think sounds better. (ultimate decision up to you of course). Just send me a PM. :)</p>
<p>You can send me a PM; I've always been told that I'm an excellent editor. I just joined the other day, so I understand if you don't trust me, haha!</p>
<p>Mmm...with each and every comment it gets better and better. Thank you guys so much! Would anyone like to critique still?</p>
<p>you can PM me</p>
<p>PM me as well with it.</p>
<p>You can PM me as well.</p>
<p>You can PM me too. I would be happy to trade essays.</p>