<p>I'm a CC student applying this year for UCLA, UCB, UCSD with math/econ as my first major. though I participate in TAP, my current GPA is at borderline, so I put much stress on my personal statement. I heard UCLA, UCB read personal statement closely so hopefully it gonna increase my chance a little bit. I've finished the rough draft for both prompts, and I badly need feedback for my paper! If you have some free time to look at it, any comment would be much appreciate. A little bit too late to ask but maybe someone just come across my post on his/her boring day. Please comment below and I'll send you my ps. Thank you so much for reading my post!!!!</p>
<p><strong><em>Quick summary of two prompts</em></strong>
Prompt1: Write about my experiences with business since childhood, how I change my perspective to math/econ. Hold a management position in one company. how i apply this experience to open my own business.</p>
<p>Prompt 2: a narrative about being s an independent student. Struggle with poverty, new environment, bad decision. Work 40 hours/weeks, try to maintain education.</p>
<p>Not so much too tell but I'm giving my last shot. Deadline is coming so I hope to complete my application soon:) </p>