<p>I'm a CC student applying this year for UCLA, UCB, UCSD with math/econ as my first major. though I participate in TAP my current GPA is at borderline, so I put much stress on my personal statement. I heard UCLA, UCB read personal statement closely so hopefully it gonna increase my chance a little bit. I've finished the rough draft for both prompts and badly need feedback for my paper! If you have some free time to look at it, any comment would be much appreciate. A little bit too late to ask but maybe someone just come across my post on his/her boring day. Please comment below and I'll send you my ps. Thank you so much for reading my post!!!!</p>
<p><strong><em>Quick summary of two prompts</em></strong>
Prompt1: Write about my experiences with business since childhood, how I change my perspective to math/econ. Hold a management position in one company. how i apply this experience to open my own business.</p>
<p>Prompt 2: a narrative about being s an independent student. Struggle with poverty, new environment, bad decision. Work 40 hours/weeks, try to maintain education.</p>
<p>Not so much too tell but I'm giving my last shot. Deadline is coming so I hope to complete my application soon:) </p>