<p>Many people at this forum have offered to look over my personal statement before I send it off. I told them that I would take them up on their offer, but I ended starting over again and again. </p>
<p>Now that I am finished, would anyone be willing to look over it and give me tips?</p>
<p>If so, would you please PM me or comment here? </p>
<p>Thank you.</p>