Good start?

<p>I'm a freshman at a VERY competitive highschool. During 8th grade I was sick alot and therefore I started in below average classes (Spanish 1 second semester and algebra 1) during the summer I will be making up geometry and taking Spanish 2 online. Next year I will be working at a gym where we get people who are usually disabled physically in some way but we get alot of regular people also. The first semester i got straight A's except for a C- in spanish 2 because I missed a test at the end of the semester which was due to a family emergency I'd prefer not talk about and I hadn't taken the second half of spanish 1. Anyway the teacher was a real jerk and didn't let me make it up but my counseler says colleges will look at my online spanish 2 grade. I also had a B in AS english which was a really hard class because the teacher never told anyone what they did wrong on essays. When asked he just said that "it wasn't an A essay". I'll probably get a B again due to the fact that he expects us to memorize whole chapters of Great Expectations because he tests our reading by asking us to write down specific quotes. I was planning to take pre cal next summer and end up in Calculus 1 my junior year. Maybe if I don't find it too hard I'll Calculus 2 that summer. That way I could take AP stat senior year to boost my GPA. After taking AP comp sci next year I was going to take a job coding Iphone apps during the summer. They pay you 1k a month which is pretty nice because my family isn't very well off. I'm a white caucasian male. I very recently started a charity by selling cheap but good food because our school's foodprovider sucks. its been very successful so far. I am looking for EC's to take. I realize this is just a bunch of hypothetical ramblings but is this a good start? I am looking at top Ivies. Stanford and Harvard mainly.</p>

<p>Now that I reread it its even more incoherent then I thought.</p>