<p>Hi, I didn't have much to do on the last day before the big test, but I was just a little unsure about my essay;do you think you can take a minute or two to look at it, give it a grade, and maybe a general suggestion or two ;) Thank you! I did this in 25 minutes FLAT: </p>
<p>Topic:
Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today?Plan and write an essay in which ou develop your point of view on this issue. Support your positioning with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experiences or observations. </p>
<pre><code> Creativity is the primary factor in advancing global and parochial societies. Although many will argue that creativity is more of an asset for current consumption, one must concede the inevitable truth: without creativity there would be no human progress whatsoever. In today's rapidly advancing society, is there not a greater need for adjusting to change when compared to any other society in history? Examples from history, medicine and agriculture provide the credibility for such an assertion.
India and China have hit the news media for two things: overpopulation and underproduction; these two nations simply cannot provide enough food for their rapidly growing populations. Furthermore extreme poverty prevents a common farmer from purchasing new technology to produce additional crops. What then can possibly be the solution to limited resources and a desire for additional goods? Creativity. In India the rodroka is a common device used among the impoverished farmers to produce additional gains of crops per season, sometimes as much as twenty five percent. All that is used to produce the rodroka is a simple rubber band attached to a pulley, attached to an oxen's tail. The ox which is used to create the rows of crops quickens its movement in response to a simple pull on its tail. This ingenious invention has increased the agriculture sector's output by twenty percent in one year. Creativity helped save the life of hundreds of thousands of starving people.
Creativity is ubiquitous; it is in every single person. Look at the tiny macromolecules in the human body. The AID's virus has been deadly, killing millions in Asia within a year. The virus works by accepting only the sucrose enzyme, an enzyme present in every human blood cell. The virus then proceeds to destroying the sucrose and draining the cell of its nutrients. This specificity of the virus to sucrose has left scientists boggled on what to do, a differently. Recent advancements in medicine however have lead to the creation of "Viricidal-A," an enzyme which has a structure that mirrors that of sucrose's; Viricidal-A locks onto the AID's virus and combusts as AID's tries to consume it. The number of AID's patients with this treatment has shown remarkable progress towards recovery. This medicine uses the ingenious technique of disguising a cure as a component of AID's; such ingenuity can save millions of lives.
Another example of creativity has to do with militaries. Terrorists and malevolent people have found new ways to sabotage and annihilate innocent civilians. Democratic governments however are one step ahead. From thousands of miles up in space we are tracking these terrorist's hideouts with orbiting satellites. We can listen to every one of these terrorists' conversations and see every movement of location without actually risking a human life. Because terrorist cells continually grow in today's modern world there is a constant need to find new ways of tacking them down.
These three examples delineate how ingenuity in today's world is in high demand and is needed to advance various peoples of the world into the future. Without creativity human progress would stagnate.
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