HELP! activity essay

<p>I just wrote a short essay about a "favorite activity" that several colleges ask for. Anyways, it's about swimming. Anyone care to read? I wasn't sure what exactly to write because I've never had to do something... it's really rough so I'd appreciate anything.</p>

<p>sure, i will read it.</p>

<p>I'll read it!</p>

<p>yeah same here</p>

<p>send it over</p>

<p>I come from a family of swimmers, love to read it!</p>