Help! grade my essay

<p>hi guys-
I;m not that great of a fast essay writer so I am kind of nervous for the sat essay- I tried one... Please honestly grade it.</p>

<p>Prompt:Is progress always positive?</p>

<p>Essay</p>

<p>Progress is the result of hard perseverance and work. It carves our way into the future and gives us something to look back upon. Progress no matter what kind is always positive.</p>

<p>To make progress, one usually perseveres towards a goal. Whether the goal be from baking cookies to bringing world peace, anything that progresses towards one's goal is something positive for hat person. Homework for example can become a huge struggle for students now days. Progress in completing their homework would be viewed very positively by he student. </p>

<p>Furthermore, even in gigantic goals that affects millions of people, such as wars, progress on one's side will bring joy to people in that country. Even when that country loses the war, and progress is made on the other opposing side, in the end, no matter what viewpoint, positive progress was accomplished in the country that gained victory. </p>

<p>"We will not be satisfied with anything less than progress, for progress is always positive," is a verstile statement. progress will always be a great thing that make us one step closer to our goal. Progress is why we live in such a wonderful world today.</p>

<p>I know it doesn't sound that great right now, but that was my first attempt at the SAT essay so please give me some responses on how I did!
Thank you so much!</p>