HELP! is this okay? converted nonlinear narrative...

<p>help! i was writing my common app essay, when i remembered an essay i wrote last year for ap english. it was a nonlinear narrative, and it's a little different than most essays... i dont know if this is too much of a risk? anyone willing to read it please? thanks!!</p>

<p>bumppppppppp</p>

<p>bump bump bumpppp</p>