Help with Amherst Essay/ Common App

<p>Will anyone read my amherst essay or my regular old common app personal statement? i really can't get any constructive feedback at all.....</p>

<p>i'll try...</p>

<p>Sure, I'll be glad to take a look. PM me :)
Btw, won't be applying to Amherst.</p>

<p>me .</p>

<p>me.....i have considered amherst, but gave up...</p>

<p>I'd be happy to critique - pm me
is it more a general critique you want or specific grammer and vocab?
im already in college btw</p>

<p>Ive PMed a couple of people now, but ive never gotten a reply</p>

<p>Send it over!</p>

<p>email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>