Commonapp Essay - critique and grading

College Essays
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<p>I would be very glad if someone would read my Commonapp essay and judge it from 1-10, but I sent it in a month ago so no changes can be made. Unfortunately, it is not my revised version. I made a mistake sending in the wrong version, but it was only one final sentence which got left behind and I think it is fine anyway. I have not gotten any help with it and it was made in one day.</p>

<p>I know, this is not a good plan if I want to be accepted to Amherst or Dartmouth, but I think it is ok and I am also an International with English as a second language so I hope they can see past my flaws.</p>

<p>If anyone is interested in reading my essay which is no longer than 500 words just say so and I'll PM it! Got to go to school now, but will check this thread later today.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>bump10char</p>

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<p>If you still need it, I would be happy to.</p>

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<p>Thanks! Sent a message.</p>

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<p>Would be happy to if you still want a critique!</p>

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<p>Thanks, but I got the critique I wanted to hear already ;)</p>

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<p>Send it over! I’m curious :)</p>

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<p>sure, send it over :)</p>

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<p>If you’re still looking for a critique, I’m willing to give you one</p>