Hey I just met you. And this is CRAZY. But here's my essay. So grade it maybe :D

<p>Hey didn't revise it in the 25 minutes it was given. But yeah.. Anyway my school been giving out so many AP time writes and I basically followed to same idea/path for this essay as well. </p>

<p>Here is it:</p>

<p>*People are entirely responsible through the example they set for the behavior of others. For example, teachers are entirely responsible for the actions of their students. Leaders are constantly the scapegoat for the behavior of their citizens. Several examples that demonstrate how people are entire responsible for the behavior of others, regardless if they set good examples or not, can be shown in politics and schools across the world.</p>

<p>Being in school for most of my life, I constantly see teachers being blamed for the entire class. When I was in elementary school, I remember there was a class that had the worst, most obnoxious students ever and the principal constantly had to visit that class the tone it down. For the first few months, these disruptive students were sent to the principal/assistant principal's office. But after around 3 months, the principal started to blame the teacher for the trouble of her students. For the entire time, I thought the class acted like that because she set extremely bad examples. In fact, a lot of students in the school believed that was why her class is so unruly. One day I actually was asked to go to her class and try to calm the class down. And that was when I realized that this herculean task was utterly hopeless. Although this experience is extremely unfair and completely undemocratic at times, the sad truth is people are responsible for the behavior of others, even if they demonstrate great examples for the students to set.</p>

<p>Another more general example would the leaders of a company, country, etc. Constantly in the news, world leaders are attacked by the actions of their citizens. For example, China is constantly scorned as being a copycatter treat to the American people. Chinese company HuaWei wants to expand their trade and markets into the America country and trade officials are extremely disapproval to this idea. This company was called a threat from the American officials because basically the chinese people pirate movies, steal music, and hurt American people. This faulty logic shows how a person is responsible for the behavior of others, even if he or she was great models for people to follow. Thus shows people are responsible through the example they sets, regardless if they even recommended or preached this behavior is good or not.</p>

<p>As demonstrated by my elementary school experiences to the leaders of multibillion dollar companies, people are blamed for everything their workers, surrounding people, students are doing. It is completely unjust that HuaWei was blamed for the entire country of China. It was completely unfair that Ms. Miller was blamed for having disruptive students in her class. Indeed after a close analysis of these two examples, People are entirely responsible through the example they set for the behavior of others, regardless if they set good examples or not.*</p>

<p>If you’re talking about the October SAT, you didn’t really answer the question of should people be responsible for the people of other countries. Good esaay, though.</p>

<p>So the grade would be 4… 3… 5… 2… 1…?</p>

<p>And no… just a practice prompt</p>

<p>can you give some pointers?</p>

<p>I would have to know the question, but I’d give it a 5 or 6. Good examples, vocab, solid.</p>

<p>Oh crap. LOL I forgot the prompt! It was:</p>

<p>Is a person responsible, through the example he or she sets, for the behavior of other people?</p>

<p>I’d say 6, but then again I’m not a grader. 5 at the lowest.</p>

<p>Guys, if you are going to say it’s like a piece of crap, please tell me WHY you said it, instead of just saying useless words to me.</p>

<p>This also applies to people giving me high scores.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>+Well formatted
+Good vocab and grammar
+Good examples
+Variety in sentence structure</p>

<p>-No indents
-Some minor errors</p>

<p>Overall 5-6</p>

<p>You can start by explaining why I need to rewrite?</p>

<p>And does indents really deduct points away from your score o-o?</p>

<p>@Lacrosse37 get off the forums, seriously kid.</p>

<p>I’m not sure if indents will take away points, but it’s something to improve on!</p>

<p>^LOL</p>

<p>someone’s got extra time and wants to ■■■■■ on a forum. Let me give you a challenge.
Ready? Here it is:
Post “hi guys I’m a ■■■■■ sorry” on every single thread in this forum.
^Surefire way not to get banned.</p>

<p>also it’s *your
KTHXBAI</p>