<p>Assignment:"should people take more responsibility for solving problems that affect their communities or the nation in general?"
There are several problems that may affect our nations; these problems maybe political financial or even social, but we must know hoe to stand against these dilemmas.We should be one hand and try to get upon all the obstacles that face us.I believe that one should not cry and grieve if he lost what he wants and did not achieve it,and people must take more responsibility towards what faces their nations.
History has always been and will always be a motivator because it is full of great figures;let's take Mahatma Ghandi as an example; he achieved a lot for his country,India,he stood against the principle of "Satyagraha".As discrimination was a problem in India,People must have stood up and fought against it.
As I said before that history is a powerful motivator even for current generations, so we must take the twenty fifth of January Egyptian revolution as an example,All the Egyptian citizens stood up against a wrong system and said "NO";they achieved what they wanted because they were one hand and they will always be.
As we can see that responsibility towards our communities is an international internal sensation.It is not only in Indians ,Egyptians or in a specific nation,but it is in all humans. We see the old American discrimination between the black and white people;the black people were humiliated and scolded through their lives,but by holding all their hands together they achieved the unapproachable leaded by many activists as Rosa Parks and Frederick Douglass.
All in all, standing against our nations problems is a duty because we are humans;we all have the same organs and we all have hearts.We must think with our hearts and see that nothing is impossible.Everything can be achieved.</p>
<p>first of all this is my personal openion </p>
<p>1)you cant say all in all its unformal
2) your examples are great but you cant achieve high score without elaborating your examples say how these examples support your side or point
ie say what would happen if egyptians didnt take actions against mubark . mubark will become a greater despot and this will affect them negativly </p>
<p>my score 7 or 8</p>
<p>7, it’s just written in a very informal, conversational style. While in many cases that can be seen as a personal writing style, it is not what they want on the SAT</p>
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