How's this for common app essay 1 topic?

<p>I am thinking of writing my essay based off the fact that I have had the same group of five friends since elementary school. We have not once had any drama, fights, etc. and support each other 100% and accept each other for who we are. I want to talk about how each one of my friends has taught me a different thing...one is very outgoing and has given me the courage to come out of my shell, one is daring and adventurous and I've now become more adventurous etc. I will definitely talk more about myself but within the context of my close friendship with these girls. In an age where there is a lot of back stabbing and competition, I think this is a unique situation and could be a decent essay. Would like some opinions please!</p>

<p>I think that’s a very unique idea. Go for it! I often tell students that you should always write about something your passionate about. If this topic means something for you, there is no reason you shouldn’t try. Good luck!</p>

<p>Remember this is for your college admissions review, not a usual hs writing assignment. And remember it needs a balance of “show, not tell.” Think about what you need to show those adcoms. From your description, maybe it will show grounding and appreciation- but is that enough? As usual, it would help to know what tier of colleges.</p>

<p>This is an interesting topic, and you can certainly give it a shot. However this could easily turn into a regurgitation of memories only you can understand or dwelling on descriptions of your friends instead of your own intellectual development.</p>

<p>Try writing a rough draft and see if it there is a coherent idea.</p>