<p>Just because I really enjoy editing, here’s one way to cut it down:</p>
<p>Dear Academic Progress Committee,</p>
<p>I’m writing this letter to appeal the decision to dismiss me from SUNY Plattsburgh. I do not blame anybody but myself. Over these two semesters, I was overwhelmed by many academic struggles.</p>
<p>My first semester was really tough for me: immediately I found my courses to be very challenging. During mid-terms, I had two E’s! One subject that gave me the most trouble was Chemistry. My chemistry professor strongly recommended that I take a remedial Chemistry course in addition with the four credit general Chemistry course I was already taking. In the end I withdrew from the regular chemistry class and continued the remedial course. That first semester, my GPA was 3.11.</p>
<p>I started my second semester with high hopes. Looking back, I realize was overly ambitious about the number of credits I could handle. As the semester progressed, the content started to get complex. The biggest mistake I made was waiting to seek help. I started going to the learning center, the library, and even the professors. Even with the last minute efforts, my cumulative GPA dropped to 1.92</p>
<p>Before the year ended, I spoke to my advisor about some of the difficulties I faced. Concerning my grades, she said it looks like I was overwhelmed by taking more credits than I could handle. With her advice, I decided that it would be a good idea to drop my music minor in order to focus on the sciences. We then mapped out the courses that I would need to take in the upcoming semesters in order to graduate. My advisor even advised me to consider changing from a B.A. to a B.Sc. degree. </p>
<p>My experience at SUNY Plattsburgh has taught me a lot. I am more mature, I take full responsibility and I have a new resolve to turn things around. If given the chance to continue at SUNY Plattsburgh on academic probation, I will be certain to make the necessary changes based on the lessons that I’ve learned. First, I’ve learned what study methods and techniques are most effective for me. This will make my study time more efficient. Secondly, I will seek help sooner. Most important, I will make sure to take on a course load I can handle and follow the plan that my advisor and I worked out. Thank you for allowing me to summarize this past year, and hopefully to get another opportunity to prove I am worthy to attend SUNY Plattsburgh.</p>