<p>I have completed and revised both of my UC Essays, the first is short, the second is longer. Total is 1022 words as it stands.</p>
<p>My problem with getting criticism is that both essays concern, some way or another, my involvement in the marching arts, specifically Marching Band and Drum and Bugle Corps. It's a niche activity that the people who read my essays will probably know very little about, and you probably know very little about as well. This is why I need you!</p>
<p>Am I explaining these activities well? Am I making a good impression about my involvement? These are the questions I really need answered, as well as any other advice or criticism you could offer. If you would like to read my essays I will PM you. </p>
<p>Thank you very much in advance.</p>