<p>I just wrote an essay for the common app and thought it seemed really good while I was writing it. The more I read it though, the less certain I am. Would anyone read it please and tell me if it akes any sense or if I'm just getting paranoid?
I really need help.</p>
<p>ithink thats totally normal for everyone... especially when you try to compare your essays to others' essays.
im sure it is great!
i can read it and give some feedback if you like?</p>
<p>That'd be great. i'v sent you a PM. thanks</p>
<p>I'd like to read it too. Which prompt are you using?</p>
<p>I'm thinking I should put it under 'a topic of my choice' because I dont think it directly falls under any other prompt. I'll send it to you and you can tell me what you think.</p>
<p>ill read it and help :) pm it over</p>
<p>If you want an adult's perspective, PM it to me.</p>