hey !! i am taking the SAT for the first time and i have read about the essay strategies and i wrote one here for practice
please give me your comments :)
Passion and craving for a certain aim is pointsman for a typical normal human life. Nevertheless, if enthusiasm crosses the normal limit, it will turn into a destructive weapon. Fanaticism for a certain ideology that overwhelming the whole cogitation of a person is considered one of the psychiatric disorders, and thus people who are extremely zealot need to reconsider their way of living again, or they may end the way that Adolf Hitler did, or maybe they will spend their last days suffering from a symptoms of goal that was scored by an opponent in a football match.
Adolf Hitler is an excellent example to lay down my idea. He is one of the most famous leaders that were known for their heartiness toward their aims even though these aims were far away from nobility and humanity. He had the dream of hegemony over the world and exterminating the Jews. But this intense interest drove him crazy into the Second World War and the Holocaust where he ended the lives of many people. Finding that all his work didn’t achieve the ultimate victory for him, Adolf shot himself to escape the mortification of captivity.
This enthusiasm hasn’t necessary be bounded to the egotist glory, but it can also be for a certain party. A tangible example would be the people who developed an extravagant passion for sports. They waste like decades of their life exerting drastic emotions of happiness and madness posing their health to real dangers ranging from stresses to even chronic diseases , all of that because of the uncontrolled interest.
In conclusion, enthusiasm is a motive for life as long as it’s kept under the safe limits. The extreme interest leads to craziness, and it’s your choice to have a stress-free life and reconcile with yourself or just commit a suicide after being beaten in a football game !!
