i'd like a reader, please

College Essays
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<p>Same old, same old, anyone willing to take a look at my common app essay draft? (preferrably non-08)</p>

<p>The last paragraph is horrendous and full of general wishy-washy stuff, but before I take the ax to it I'm looking to get a feel for how much it sucks.</p>

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<p>im 08 but id read it if you'd like</p>

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<p>Send it over</p>

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<p>send it over</p>