<p>Thank you SO much in advance!</p>
<p>So I have three essays that are in their rough-draft forms, you can take your pick which one/few you'd like to read :D</p>
<h1>1 is my common app extracurricular one (150 words) about how music mentoring kids made me want to become a teacher.</h1>
<h1>2 is one of two short answers (125 words) for the U of Rochester that's about how I handled a break-up (it's supposed to be about an obstacle you faced and how you overcame it and I thought it epitomized how I deal with things pretty well - initially I would have never thought to write about relationships but I think I like it quite a bit!)</h1>
<h1>3 is the second essay for the U of R that's pretty much about how I would fit into U of R (it's one of those prompts that are like 'our students are like this, how are you like this too?') (also 125 words)</h1>
<p>All of them are around 200 words at the moment so I need LOTS of help trimming them down to 125 to 150 words... any and all help would be GREATLY APPRECIATED!</p>
<p>Thanks to all! ^__^ <3</p>
Any more?</p>