Hi! I wondered if you guys could grade my essay for the question mentioned above, because I’m not really sure if my examples ‘fit’ into this question properly, and if my approach to this question was… just simply wrong 
Free time would be useless and ineffective if we had alot of it. Working less would not mean that we would do other effective activities. Free time is a valuable asset because it is the award we receive from working hard, and having unlimited of it wouldn't contribute to our creativity or activeness.
Steve Jobs, the creator of Apple, was already known to be very effective on his free times. Rather he worked or not, he would wake no later than 5 a.m, go jog for an hour, read daily papers, and play videogames, which was his favorite hobby. This man is also known to have innovated the nicely designed iPods and iMacs. His creativity suppressed all of others, and now Apple is one of the most successful companies. Steve Jobs did not have much free time, being that he was the CEO of a world-leading enterprise. He was able to prove us that no free time is necessary in order for people to be as active and creative as they want to be.
Vacations may mean myriad things to students, but for most of my friends, the main objectives of vacations were: sleeping, eating, and doing practically nothing. Meanwhile few other people would go out and have part-time jobs or do something effective, most of them had that common goal. At the end of the vacation, most students looked very relaxed and they seemed to have the best break ever, from doing absolutely nothing. If people worked less, instead of becoming more active and creative, they would become indolent.
Free time only seems perfect when citizens have worked hard enough. If these people worked less, they would not become more active, but sluggish and inactive. If a person wants to become more active and creative, it would not be the free time that would guide their way, but rather their willingness.
I know it’s not a good essay, but I’m taking the SAT on May and I dont want the essay to ruin my Writing section
Help please!