Is anyone willing to read and edit/revise my commonapp essay?

<p>Hi, I picked a topic of my choice when I wrote the Common App essay. I was wondering if anyone would take some time to read over my essay and give me helpful tips? I think my intro and conclusion are strong, but my body is a little weird. I will send you a PM! Thank you!</p>

<p>I could read it over for you. I already have my essay topic. Read the thread “Which topic is best?” to assess my credibility.</p>

<p>I’ll check it out. My essay’s already done.</p>

<p>Hey, sorry, looking for someone who has built a strong reputation over CC and preferably someone who is already in/have graduated from college.</p>

<p>bump please help!</p>

<p>I could, I’m a sophomore in college</p>