This past January I applied to USC, and then I knew I could not post my essay due to the risk of it being seen as plagiarized by the university if they were to put it through a plagiarism checker. However know admissions decisions have already been made by USC and are being sent out on the 22nd, so I wanted to ask if it would be okay to post my essay here now and have others give it feedback? I know I’m posting it after decisions have already been made, but I want just some feedback or opinions on whether it was good or not. Thank you for your help.
I suggest that you not post your essay up for public view. If others respond and say they are willing to review your essay, then you can share it with them via PM.
Why not run it by your English teacher instead of a bunch of strangers online? Most of the people who post here are kids like yourself. There was a thread yesterday where a person claimed to be an adult, offering to read an essay. That person had exactly one post, and that one post had a typo in it. THIS is the person you’re trusting with your essay??
I would suggest NOT posting publicly. If you are going to send it to someone, make sure that they have at least a few hundred posts and that they have a good track record on CC. There is a CC thread on the college essay forum for finding trusted readers.
I, too, would be happy to look at it if you were to PM me.
I am not now, nor have I ever been, an English teacher. But I know how to write effective essays & how to critique others’ works. Please PM it to me as I would love to offer a brief critique.
Sorry @bjkmom . Your DH is probably wonderful. But the cases I’ve seen- the essays tend to come back grammatically and syntactically correct but bland.