<p>I am working on the common app "why transfer essay" right now. Can you guys take a look at my approach and see if it's ok?</p>
<p>This is my approach: First, I talked about how culturally unacceptable it is to speak up my mind and being idealistic in my culture(I'm an int'l student). Then I discussed how my experience in current community college encourages me to express my ideas, and how it motivates me to apply to 4 year universities that will allow me to implement my goals.</p>
<p>I used many specific examples and conversations to draw out my stories, and I like how it drag reader into the situations. But the thing I really concern about is that I didn't talk too much detail about my major or program since all the schools I am applying to have their own supplement to address those topics, would that be ok?</p>