<p>[s]How is this essay?proof read it as I went, but there still may be some errors.[/s] I have written an essay, but I am worried that it is not personal enough, but it's on something I feel very strongly about and that reflects my career goals. Would anybody be willing to review it? The prompt is </p>
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According to Henry David Thoreau, 'One is not born into the world to do everything, but to do something.' What is your something?
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<p>p.s. it's for UMCP
edit: entire essay removed, realized that this is public forum.</p>