Is this appropriate?

<p>this was a very tough letter for me to write and i want to make sure that i captured the right tone. In the last few weeks, despite being accepted ED, I have been extremely stressed with my varsity sport (before and after school daily) and the 6 AP/1 Honors class I'm in. It's physically and mentally exhausting. I tried to make a letter to convey this and have them consider letting me drop a class. I don't want them to be offended or anything....can anyone read this and tell me what they think?</p>

<p>anyone...please?</p>

<p>To whom are you writing?</p>

<p>brown university</p>

<p>I'll read it.</p>

<p>I'll look over it. Send me</p>

<p>B e a s t ! ! !</p>